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ANALYSIS OF WRITING SUBJECT

As you can see here, this post type is Discussion, which has two requirements:

• Discuss both views: family has the strongest influence on children; other factors that affect children
• Give your own opinion: family has more influence

And as you all know, the structure of a part 2 lesson includes 4 parts as follows:

• Introduction
• Body Paragraph 1
• Body Paragraph 2
• Conclusion

Now let’s go into each part together!

ANALYSIS OF EACH PART OF THE TEST

1. Introduction

In the opening part, we will repeat the two ideas of the topic and give our own point of view

• /zɜːrt/ exert
• ip-ct impact

exert an impact on something: have an impact on something

Sample:

In this day and age, influence on a child’s development has still been a subject of hot debate. Many people suppose that family exerts the greatest impact on children; however, some say that other influences such as music or other people have the biggest influence on a child. I personally support the former opinion and justifications (=reasons) are as follows.

2. Body Paragraph 1

In this section, we will analyze together an opinion stated in the article, often an opinion that we do not support. You should give your opinion at the end of the body of the article. So in the body of the first article, we will talk about the influence of factors outside the family on children.

There are many factors that affect a child: is a common expression, does not help you get a high band score. Instead she has a verb to express change, there are different types of words /ˈveri/

Factors that affect a child very

/iˈmɜːrdʒəns/ emergence of something: the appearance of something

We all realize that today’s electronic devices have extremely harmful effects of electronic devices

Sample:

First, factors that affect a child vary but the most outstanding one may be the emergence of technical devices. As a result, children will be easily to get access to public websites or social networking sites such as Facebook or Instagram. There are a number of videos or songs or even short films that are shown on these sites and children may watch and imitate the characters.

This is the first element, we will add a second element.

singifacint – significant

Sample:

First, factors that affect a child vary but the most outstanding one may be the emergence of technical devices. As a result, children will be easily to get access to public websites or social networking sites such as Facebook or Instagram. There are a number of videos or songs or even short films that are shown on these sites and children may watch and imitate the characters.

Second, another significant factor that exercises a great influence on a child’s development is friends. At school, children who share the same personality, interest or concept may form a group, which can be considered a small community. consequently, as being a part of that community, children’s thoughts or behaviors are much likely to be affected by their fellows.

3. Body Paragraph 2

in _____ of: (spelling favor)

in favor of something: to support, to agree with something

Sample:

Though it cannot be denied that friends or music have a profound impact on a child’s development, I am in favor of the opinion that family exerts the greatest influence on children.

/etɪkət/ – etiquette: manners, communication

code of ____ (spelling Ethics)

code of ethics: ethical standards

Sample:

Though it cannot be denied that friends or music have a profound impact on a child’s development, I am in favor of the opinion that family exerts the greatest influence on children. First, children are taught etiquette, code of ethics by parents at a very young age; therefore, they might behave properly when communicating with others.

And to balance with the first body paragraph here we add a note like this:

Because children spend a huge amount of time being with their children at home so it is easy for them to see the way that their parents solve problems and copy them: Simple sentences, unusual vocabulary

see = witness

solve problem = everyday issues are handled

bear a striking /rɪˈzembləns/

bear a resemblance to somebody: to resemble someone.

Sample:

Though it cannot be denied that friends or music have a profound impact on a child’s development, I am in favor of the opinion that family exerts the greatest influence on children. First, children are taught etiquette, code of ethics by parents at a very young age; therefore, they might behave properly when communicating with others. Second, children spend a huge amount of time being with parents at home and it is easy for them to witness the way how everyday issues are handled by their parents. they will bear a striking resemblance to their parents when it comes to problem-solving.

4. Conclusion

So we’ve come a long way, and at the conclusion we just need to repeat our own opinion one more time and it’s done.

In conclusion, although it is clear that factors such as music or friends have a great effect on children, I am of the opinion that family exerts the most profound effect on a child’s development.

So we have finished analyzing and writing articles on this topic! Please try to analyze and rewrite according to your opinion!